人教版九年级英语第十二单元作文

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2021年1月7日14:22:43 1119字阅读3分43秒

假如你是Kate,今天发生了一些不开心的事,请你根据提示以“An unlucky day”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

要点:1.因为闹钟没有响,早上起床晚了;

2.没赶上校车,不得不步行去上学;

3.到校后,老师让交家庭作业时,才发现作业落在了家里;

4.文章结尾进行总结:糟糕的一天。

An unlucky day 

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An unlucky day

I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读:本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份,用第一人称的方式讲述不开心的一天;讲述过去的事情,用一般过去时;书写时要注意用全所给材料,文句通顺,内容完整。

2.例文点评:本例文按时间顺序got up late this morning…7:10….By the time I got there,…when I got to school…When the teacher asked for my homework讲述今天发生过不愉快的事情,文字表达清楚,内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点:短语:get up late;wash my face quickly ;run to the bus stop without breakfast;be late for class.;ask for;leave it at home

句型:原因状语从句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.;

时间状语从句By the time I got there, the school bus had already gone;

宾语从句When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home;

感叹句What a bad day it was!

【点睛】本篇是材料作文,书写前要认真他阅读题干,了解题干的要求,叙述发生过的事情用一般过去式时;书写时要围绕题干提示的要点,按时间顺序、有条理地讲述自己不幸的一天。

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